The
Windlass Whodunit serial novel.
The
basic idea -
Let’s
write a Windlass serial novel, in the style of The Sunken Sailor, Naked
Came the Manatee, or Naked Came the
Phoenix ( a synopsis is at http://www.reversephonedirectory.com/
products/?item_id=B0001GMIQ2&search_type=AsinSearch&locale=us
This
first book (one of many to come?) will be a murder mystery, a whodunit
committed, crewed, and solved by
Windlasses.
Here’s
how it works - I’ll write the first
chapter, and send it out as an email.
Other Windlasses read what has already been written, and add subsequent chapters. The story keeps building until the case
is solved, or the whole project peters out and slinks away.
If
enough gals get into this, it may turn into a thick novel. Or it might be a really short
story. In any case, the goal
is to have fun with it.
When
it is finished, which might take years, I have absolutely no idea what we'll do
with it. Make a suggestion.
We’ll
need a snappy title. So far
I’ve thought of
Murder
at the Marina
The
Wasted Windlass
Prams
in Peril
Slaughter
a la Sunfish
Ruin
at the Ramp
Obviously,
we need some ideas
1. Absolutely
no characters can be recognizable as real people, restaurants, or
politicians. Use composite
personalities and names picked from a map.
Don’t embarrass anyone. Feel free to use and mis-use the characters
already introduced.
2. Don’t
kill Woody, the Heroine. Other
characters are disposable, but don’t wipe out the whole club too early – leave
some victims for other writers.
3. Don’t
contradict previous authors - you
can, however, turn each fact on its head, sideways, or upside down.
4. No
profanity, graphic gore, or XXXX
rated scenes. Romantic scenes are
fine.
5. Add more
characters if you want to. These
can be more women, a ghost, a friendly dolphin, an alien,
etc.
6. Add a
romantic interest if you want. A
handsome detective, a hunky marina dweller, a waiter at a restaurant, a relative
of another Windlass – just remember
he is a fictional character, and
not anyone recognizable.
7. Give
each character a tag, so the reader can remember who is who. Examples: shakes her hair, constantly
scratches her arms, stutters, polishes her boat, snaps bubblegum, wears
distinctive scarves, smells odd, twitches,
has a deep voice, stutters,
squints, etc. List this tag so
we’ll all know who is who.
8. Time
frame? Should this murder be solved
in a day? A week? A race series?
9. Keep the
action within Pinellas County.
Dunedin Marina locale is OK, but it’s now called Sloop Harbor). Named streets and real
geographical spots, such as ramps, water towers, intersections, hospitals, police
departments, etc. are great. We’re calling our fictional club
the Windlasses, unless somebody can think of a reason to keep our real club
anonymous.
10. Don’t be
shy. EVERY Windlass can pitch
in. If you envision a scene, a
dialogue, a description, or just one word,
type it up and email it to huffsandy@aol.com
11. Chapters
can be as short as a one word sentence, or run to 10 pages or so.
12. Action
verbs and exaggerated dialogue are always good.
13. You can
continue the story in third person (SHE sneezed), or switch to first person (I flinched), or
even second person (YOU gargled).
“Foolish consistency is the hobgoblin of small
minds.”
14. If your
chapter has to be in a certain place,
such as chapters 12 thru
25, or one of the last 3 chapters,
announce your intentions so 2 gals don’t slave over the same
scene.
15. Compiler/editor
(that’s me = Sandy Huff) reserves the right to clean up spelling and offer suggestions – which you can, of
course, completely ignore.
16. Suggested
deadline is 2 weeks per author.
17. Have fun!
Sequences
that might occur if this were a
main stream whodunit:
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Chapter
1 |
Introduce
main characters, kill first victim, the Klutz. |
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Chapter
2 |
Klutz
is indeed dead, police arrive, a marina resident found dead |
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Chapter
3 |
Lt.
Starboard calls investigative team |
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Chapter
4 |
Woody
dreams – did those deaths really happen? |
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Middle
chapters |
Alibi
checking, red herrings, more murders, more character development, more villains, etc.
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2nd
to last |
Heroine
puts clues together |
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Next
to last |
Heroine
confronts killer, big actions scene as she fights for her life, wins.
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Last
|
Wrap
up of motives & loose ends |
Chapter |
Chapter
Title |
Author |
Page
# In
14 Ariel font |
Synopsis |
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1 |
Too Clumsy to Live |
Sandy
Huff |
1-6 |
Klutz
rams boats & cars, is discovered
dead |
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2 |
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Jutta
Kohl |
7-9 |
Police Lt. Johnny Starboard arrives.
Lucas, a witness is found dead. |
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3 |
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Jean
Darneal |
10-11 |
Lt.
Starboard calls investigative team for Lucas’ body |
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4 |
Déjà
vu |
Sarah
Erb |
12-20 |
Woody
dreams |
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5 |
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Jeanie
Byrd |
21-22 |
Booth
McMullen reveals a secret –
the murder of Flora’s sister Patsy 25 years ago. |
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6 |
Handsome
is as Handsome Does |
Mary
Sanders |
23-25 |
Woody
meets Booth
McMullen |
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7 |
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Robin
Story |
26-32 |
Woody
arrested. |
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8 |
Meet
Woody's lawyer, Keene Eastbay |
Jeanie
Byrd |
33-36 |
Sleazy
lawyer Keene Eastbay has plans |
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Teddy
Buell |
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Patsy
Massarelli |
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Maggie
Wernet |
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Jan
Risberg |
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SarahBeth
Reeves |
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Eleanor
Dube |
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Sydney
McShane |
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Rebecca
Hallstrom |
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Nancy
Cooper |
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Mary
Sikorra |
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Gale
Pinkowski |
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Freida
Williams |
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